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You found a rock of dull gray and rough edges
Small and cracked this rock was at the bottom of a moutain
You took it away

Promising this ugly rock it could shine like a gem
Telling it to trust the world

The rock believed you
Putting forth it's effort to glow like a gem
The rock trusted you

Once the rock saw it's self as a shiney new gem
It held pride in it's self and in you
The ugly rock thanked you for turning it into a beautiful gem

You left it there
You put the rock down suddenly next to the base of a moutain
The rock didnt understand why youd leave it
So the rock thought it wasnt good enough

The ugly little rock tried very hard to become better
To make you happy enough with it to take it back
But everything the ugly rock did seemed to push you away
What would it do now?

Sitting alone the ugly rock yelled your name
Desperate to repay you for making it feel like a gem
For building a world for the ugly rock, it wanted to hold on

Today the ugly rock sees it's dark gray colour
All the craks and hard sharp edges
The ugly rock sees it's nothing like a gem at all

Sitting at the base of a moutain
It asks the cold rain why you left it there
What did it do wrong.

Rain and weather
Time and pain
The rock of gray felt  the little crack you made grow
And grow
And grow

The little crack that split it in two
Because of you
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Mood: Love ~Wildchild9 Jun 30, 2011  Student General Artist
Beautiful...:love: :heart:
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*Scribble-Demon Jul 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:bow: Thank you very much :heart:
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~Wildchild9 Jul 1, 2011  Student General Artist
You're welcome, it was a beautiful poem. It really touched my heart to read it. Very well done. =)
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*Scribble-Demon Jul 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad I could do just that, I'm actually new to writing and posting poems. Your feedback gives me great encouragement.
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~Wildchild9 Jul 2, 2011  Student General Artist
Really? It was very good, I think you should keep writing. I also had trouble posting poems and stuff but it's a way of expressing yourself. Which is a good thing in most cases. =)
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*Scribble-Demon Jul 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, I'll keep writing as long as someone out there thinks it's all worth reading.
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~Wildchild9 Jul 3, 2011  Student General Artist
Good. =)
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